Oblivious
As soon as the fun and excitement fade away, I'll fade too... out into the oblivion... of nothing... eternal nothing... left with nothing, not even you... my everything. MY ANSWER TO EVERYTHING! I ask...
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Wonderful one, Alli, so tender despise this so present void._________________________________________________
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Hi Alli, The ending strophe captures that heart that we each feel. A dramatic perplexity that life offers to each of us. Kudos
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i must say allison....just something about this that surprised me....i was headed in one thought and then you completely surprised me with going in another direction.....it seems sad but yet holding...
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Wonderful and beautiful expression. I like your ending, the perfect ending. Much enjoyed Alli
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Fear and intuition of knowing can be a mutherF&^ker! you nailed it. .. .. . Hotep
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i think this way too sometimes, so i know how much these type of thoughts can tear one apart... feeling this.
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I have a yearning hunger in my soul waiting to feed..... ^most of your writings reflect such a desire, it is what propels your pen, never lose it...much enjoyedThy pen is dry, I have chosen to drown...
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Hey Alli! Quite a deep thought piece here! We always tend to read deeper than the surface of our relationships, especially at night, alone, yet the beauty of a relationship is allowing things to...
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I just have this crazy feeling something soon will change...for the worst, not the better, but I pray to God it will be for the better. I can feel this one so deep... Great write dear Alli
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Alli, dear poetess, you've illustrated this position in life so very clearly and well!! I've been to this place in life, and hope your own stay there isn't too terribly long.
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